"Writing Reflection:Researched Argument Part One"

            After writing the first few pages of my researched argument I feel more confident as my research grows. The first few pages were a little difficult attempting to reach the required page numbers, but I feel that I discovered for information to assist my argument. This causes me to worry that I will struggle making the final page requirements, but will hopefully be able to do so. I know that my research is growing stronger as I continue to discover more information on the topic. I know my writing was not as strong as it can be in the first few pages because my surroundings are not an excuse, but I know that I will need to work harder on the next section. I need to improve on the fluidity of my sentences. A lot of my sentences, especially in the first two paragraphs, are fragments and sounds like lists. I also added an example of a gluten-free store in my hometown. I understand that this example might not belong in the part one of the researched argument, but I can find other local examples to discuss later in the argument.  If I move this point to the research part two I will need to find another point that will support the argument in part one. Unfortunately my computer saved my paper in the wrong font making the paper fall a little short of the requirement. I will need to add some more information because of this. I will need to read through my part one to correct a few grammatical errors that I overlooked during the writing process. There were also a few word choices that I will need to look over to see if there is a better option. Fortunately my thesis fits well and I do not feel that I will have to change it in the future. I like the idea that you suggested of discussing why an athlete without celiac disease would want to go on a gluten-free diet. I plan on doing more research on that idea and adding it  to my part one and moving the example of the Nerdy Birdy to part two.